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Mon Oct 14, 2019 12:10 am by wrestleryu

Hi there guys. I'm mostly seeking female opponents for mixed wrestling matches to be played here or discord. I'd play my boys as either uppity jobbers or switches, depending on scenario settings and personal likings ;p

Since I'm being quite active on discord recently, here's my discord for those who may like to add me:
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Powering down for a few Cycles...

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Hello one and all.

First, I would like to apologize for the delays on my threads. I have been pretty silent over the past few weeks on this site, and I haven't been posting as much as I regularly do. I have been trying to keep up, and post something everyday, but at this point, I'm calling it.


My job is winding down, which oddly enough means my workload is at an all time high. Megatron is making me work overtime, and with the past three weeks being some odd …

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Wed Oct 02, 2019 9:07 am by skip-stop

In the words of Zoltan Chivay, "Long to tell, life is shit"

Therefore, I will be brief. A few days ago, something happened and therefore, from today and for an indefinite period, I greatly slow down in the publication of posts. I will continue to write posts as quickly as possible for my ppv thread because it is ppv. But I have to slow down in all other topics. I will try to keep up the pace, but I will definitely be slower than before this day. I could start writing posts of 4-5 lines, but …

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Post by Harrier on Mon Aug 07, 2017 7:47 pm

Thank you for your input.

I know that writing PMs is better than an open thread.
I am also not taking it too seriously, you would know what I mean when you knew which dramas took place here already regarding low self esteem.^^

But on the other hand, some people get their slots full in no time with such an open invitation, and I am curious to find out why this is not the case with me anymore.

Or another example:
Everyone looses a thread partner here and there, and I explicitly state in the blog entry that I don´t bother asking people why they abandoned this and that, assuming they have reasons to do that. But when people first approach me and then stop to write, this makes me still a little bit curious.

To be bluntly honest, I know that my command of the english language is good enough to write in understandable terms. I have some rules for myself which I apply to every post, I am approachable for compromise and my win/loss rating is even or rather negative and I sell moves. So it is not the obvious reasons and I want to know what the problem may be. Boring? Repetitive?
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Post by Sylvie on Tue Aug 08, 2017 1:15 am

I suspect the problem is more imagined than real. Looking through your history, you have many threads that stretch to 6, 7, 10+ pages. You're clearly able to get and keep matches.

Everyone gets dumped occasionally, often for reasons that have nothing to do with them. There have been several occasions where I've had to leave the site abruptly because of real life disasters.

As for your writing--you're fine. You're no worse than the average writer on this website. Everyone would like to write better, and none of us are perfect, but you're not losing partners over that.

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Post by TheWamts on Tue Aug 08, 2017 1:19 am

Feel free to shit on me, I'm probably not going to read it anyways.

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Post by Teenwrestler on Wed Aug 09, 2017 6:14 am

I like Rping with Harrier, never ever had a problem with his style Very Happy
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Post by Underdog21 on Thu Aug 10, 2017 1:59 am

So...anyone have any critiques of my characters or writing style? And be honest, please.

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Post by bricktown on Thu Aug 10, 2017 2:06 am

I'll ask for critiques as well. Aside from posting speed, I'm working on that problem already. Razz

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Post by M.J.Caboose14 on Thu Aug 10, 2017 2:44 am

I am unable to give critiques that are negative...sorry

But I will say everyone needs more hugs!

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Also following Teenwrestler's model I will say I like Underdog's style and enjoy rping with him!

Bricktown I have not rped with but I think you're god too man

Wamts...you need to read more Razz

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Post by Lunchador on Mon Aug 14, 2017 2:50 am

Harrier- I know we haven't done anything together, yet, and I couldn't really speak to the problems you're having with threads, but you've been on my list of people to try to have a thread with at some point, if that means anything.

Underdog- We haven't RP'ed in awhile, but I really enjoyed the threads we had together, in the past! The Akamatsus are fun characters, and I'd totally be up for having another thread with you again, sometime!


Also, I totally invite anyone to go ahead and tee off on me, too. I'm sure there's lots of areas I could improve in, or stuff in my writing that's a total drag, so I'm open to hearing what I could be working on.

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Post by acuya on Mon Aug 14, 2017 3:02 am

Lunchador wrote:Harrier- I know we haven't done anything together, yet, and I couldn't really speak to the problems you're having with threads, but you've been on my list of people to try to have a thread with at some point, if that means anything.

Underdog- We haven't RP'ed in awhile, but I really enjoyed the threads we had together, in the past!  The Akamatsus are fun characters, and I'd totally be up for having another thread with you again, sometime!


Also, I totally invite anyone to go ahead and tee off on me, too.  I'm sure there's lots of areas I could improve in, or stuff in my writing that's a total drag, so I'm open to hearing what I could be working on.

You sometimes put commas in odd places.

That's about all I've got. :-/

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Post by Lunchador on Mon Aug 14, 2017 3:16 am

acuya wrote:

You sometimes put commas in odd places.

That's about all I've got. :-/


That, is a fair point.

Seriously, though, I'll try to work on that.  Thanks for pointing it out!  Open to hearing about anything else bothersome that I might be doing!


While I'm at it, forgive me if this isn't an appropriate place to ask this, but since it's an improvement/critique thread, would anyone mind reading some stuff I've been writing off-site?  It's short story stuff, in a pulp vein, with a female crime-fighter getting into shenanigans.  Roughly 8,000 words at a go.  I've been working on it for awhile, and I want to know if anyone else might find it entertaining.

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