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Afw or discord matches

Mon Oct 14, 2019 12:10 am by wrestleryu

Hi there guys. I'm mostly seeking female opponents for mixed wrestling matches to be played here or discord. I'd play my boys as either uppity jobbers or switches, depending on scenario settings and personal likings ;p

Since I'm being quite active on discord recently, here's my discord for those who may like to add me:
Ryƫ#5296

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Powering down for a few Cycles...

Thu Oct 03, 2019 4:40 am by Tarantulust

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Hello one and all.

First, I would like to apologize for the delays on my threads. I have been pretty silent over the past few weeks on this site, and I haven't been posting as much as I regularly do. I have been trying to keep up, and post something everyday, but at this point, I'm calling it.


My job is winding down, which oddly enough means my workload is at an all time high. Megatron is making me work overtime, and with the past three weeks being some odd …

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Unexpected shit has come

Wed Oct 02, 2019 9:07 am by skip-stop

In the words of Zoltan Chivay, "Long to tell, life is shit"

Therefore, I will be brief. A few days ago, something happened and therefore, from today and for an indefinite period, I greatly slow down in the publication of posts. I will continue to write posts as quickly as possible for my ppv thread because it is ppv. But I have to slow down in all other topics. I will try to keep up the pace, but I will definitely be slower than before this day. I could start writing posts of 4-5 lines, but …

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Post by M.J.Caboose14 on Mon Aug 14, 2017 3:44 am

I'll read it Very Happy Also I tend to use very few commas

So I think you are fine lunchador Razz

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Post by Vcom7418 on Tue Aug 15, 2017 10:33 am

I WANT THE TRUTH!!!

What are my weak points and where can I improve my writing?

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Post by RadiantKarna332 on Tue Aug 22, 2017 4:21 am

So, for those who have RPed with me, what do you guys think about my writing?

I am aware that I have a rather... limited vocabulary, considering that I don't even speak English in real life. But is there anything else you guys can point out about my writing?

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Post by Cy_Man on Tue Aug 22, 2017 6:19 am

You're writing is very good, I can completely understand it. And seriously? You don't speak English for real? You could have had me fooled then since your English writing truly is very great and convincing. Smile

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Post by RadiantKarna332 on Tue Aug 22, 2017 6:35 am

Well, it's because I'm an English teacher, so I'm required to know English. But in real life, I speak zero English outside my class.

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Post by Old_Man_Tai on Sat Aug 26, 2017 7:40 pm

I'm glad to see this thread brought back to life! Kudos to all of you looking to help people out!


Vcom, I can't answer that yet, but you and I are long overdue for that thread I promised you, so we'll get a chance then to go over stuff.

Radiant, you're writing seems pretty damn good to me, and, like Pie-Man, I didn't even realize english wasn't your first language. If there's a flaw in your writing, or a way to improve it, it'll take a smarter man than I to tell you what it is, personally I've been impressed and enjoyed every second of our work together so far.

So, here's a rare moment. Who wants to critique me and my stuff? I promise I'll only curse the first 5 of you with eternal damnation for doing so. XD


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Post by Mystery Dragon on Sat Aug 26, 2017 7:51 pm

I'm well aware of my flaws. I just need someone to tell me them as bluntly as possible anyway.
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Post by Old_Man_Tai on Sat Aug 26, 2017 8:10 pm

The only flaw I know of yours is that you keep getting the better of me verbally, AND FOR THAT YOU SHALL....um...probably continue doing it, cause your better at the wordy words.


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Post by LARIATO on Sat Aug 26, 2017 8:24 pm

Just gonna casually throw my hat into this ring and see what happens....

be gentle pls

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Post by M.J.Caboose14 on Sat Aug 26, 2017 9:12 pm

Welp...*Cracks fingers* this is gonna be a long one....

Spoiler cause it's so long:
You suffer from SIPS

Slightly Imperfect Posting Speed...which tbf...I am just as bad at...

(I lied it wasn't a long one)

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