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Post by Cirno Sun Feb 06, 2011 12:04 am

Maybe I never changed my name and there was a guy named Cirno and I am back since today. Huh?

And that's what I love about them. Close to insanity, dark in their own accord but incredibly sexy at the same time. But I think you finally found that out, didn't you.

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Post by Hawthorne22 Sun Feb 06, 2011 1:38 am

Please, your girls are all tiny, adorable, and cuuuute.

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Post by Bluemouse Sun Feb 06, 2011 6:47 am

I don't find them to be particularly dark. Being angry isn't really dark. Children get angry, and I wouldn't fit them for a black leather trench coat right \away.

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Post by Cirno Mon Feb 07, 2011 8:31 pm

To be honest, what am going for is scary, aggressive, violent. Something different from what other people have.

Which is probably why people don't like/want to RP with me, they are afraid of their character's head being ripped off, lol.

My Price, my ' main ' will always be Cerbera, I have the most fun RPing her, whether it in a fight, a plot or a simple RP, she always brings the best in me.

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Post by Bluemouse Mon Feb 07, 2011 8:41 pm

I don't know for a fact that people avoid rp'ing with you specifically, but I think that all people that have a hard time getting match partners have up to two things in common. Those two things being poor writing/role playing, and people who don't play with the other person. My way or the highway types. I don't know that you fit into those categories, but if you did I'd imagine you'd fall into the latter trap.

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Post by Cirno Mon Feb 07, 2011 8:47 pm

If that was true, I'd have alotta wins on my names.

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Post by Bluemouse Mon Feb 07, 2011 10:10 pm

Yeah, that's why I don't count you as one of those people. One of the reasons at least.

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Post by Old_Man_Tai Thu Feb 10, 2011 4:07 am

Ok, just to keep this on track, Im going to take a risk and offer myself up. What do I do wrong? What do I do that pisses you off? in RPs, Characters, or just in general. How can I improve?

I better see the word "Bacon" used at least once damnit.

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Post by Bluemouse Thu Feb 10, 2011 4:29 am

Tai: Link an rp that you think is representative of your style and I'll take a crack at it.

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Post by Old_Man_Tai Thu Feb 10, 2011 6:45 am

I suppose the best examples of my style would have to be the two matches Ive had with ZXN on the board, which I have to say are by far the best board matches Ive ever had and rank in the top 5 matches of my Cyber Wrestling life.

http://afwrpg.informe.com/forum/arena-f28/sex-wars-title-belt-chigusa-vs-tai-complete-t3049.html


http://afwrpg.informe.com/forum/arena-f28/tai-vs-chigusa-2-fight-for-freedom-complete-t3743.html

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